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A Long Walk to Water by Linda Sue Park Review

March 19, 2015 by Daniel Johnston Leave a Comment

Having recently interviewed Linda Sue Park for the latest edition of Kid Writers Magazine, I was excited to read her bestselling book A Long Walk to Water. The book details the story of a boy named Salva who leaves Sudan during a war and eventually finds his way to Kenya and the United States. Salva lives in my town, and while I don’t know him personally, I’ve run into other people who are also “lost boys.”

Summary

We follow Salva’s journey from Sudan, which starts when the fighting breaks out when he’s in school. Salva, an eleven year-old boy, is forced to abandon his family and run off into the bushes, where he joins a group headed for Ethiopia.

On the way he befriends a boy of similar age, who winds up getting eaten by a lion. He also runs into his uncle, who has a gun and becomes the leader of their little group, and helps take care of Salva. Unfortunately, his uncle is also killed.

After a long while Salva makes it into Ethiopia, where he lives for several years. When there is a change in government the military chases them out of the country into a river filled with crocodiles, shooting at them with guns all the way. Salva is very lucky to make it out alive, and he leads a large group of kids to Kenya.

He stays in Kenya for several years, and even starts learning English. The Kenyan camps have some shortcomings like not enough food, so he is very excited when he hears that a small amount of people will be chosen to come and move to the United States. He is one of them, and moves to my home town, Rochester, NY.

Moving to America is a whole new world for him, but he soon gets used to it. He attends college to get a business degree, and six years after being in the US he manages to track down his father, who is in a hospital. He wasn’t sure whether his family was alive or not, but he reunites with his father, and learns that his mother and one of his three brothers are still alive.

Salva decides to help people throughout southern Sudan get water, and is instrumental in building a number of wells there. Throughout the book we follow a girl at the beginning of each chapter who has to walk half the day just to get water that is dirty and sees the new well being made. At the end she can now just get water easily and with the saved time can attend school.

Review

I was surprised at how short this book is, but it does a good job of just sticking to the facts and not trying to add any embellishment or anything. It’s a nonfiction book really, and it reads very well just following the adventures of Salva. More details about the refugee camps and about exactly what Salva does after he comes to the United States would’ve been nice and I think really added to the book.

I like A Long Walk to Water and think it’s well written, although I also think it’s aimed at too young an audience. It’s for middle grade readers/young teenagers, and I don’t really see the point of having them read about this. It’s a tale about suffering and how this guy persevered throughout it all. Now I find it inspiring what Salva did, but if I was younger it probably would’ve just confused me.

So for middle grade readers I don’t recommend it, because I don’t think kids should really be reading books of this type. To get the actual positive message of the book you have to have a more mature view of the world, which is why I think this would be better suited to older teenagers and up.

Filed Under: Linda Sue Park

Anne of Green Gables Review

March 16, 2015 by Daniel Johnston 1 Comment

Anne of Green Gables by L.M. Montgomery is a childhood classic that kids (especially girls) have been voraciously digesting since its release in 1908. But is it still relevant to today’s children?

For those of you who don’t know, Anne of Green Gables is a book about a girl named Anne who is adopted by Matthew and Marilla, brother and sister living in a secluded house known as Green Gables. Anne is a vivacious girl, always imagining all kinds of things and getting into all kinds of scrapes and adventures along the way.

The book tracks Anne through ages eleven to sixteen, so it moves quickly, detailing Anne’s great friendship with her neighbor Diane and her education at the schoolhouse to getting her teaching license. Throughout the book there are many lifelike characters, such as Rachel Lynde, who knows everybody’s business, other school kids, and shy Matthew.

Modern Analysis

It seems that not too many kids are still reading the Anne series, and I only read it recently through an effort to read some more older-type books like this. Part of the reason may be the length: It is over 100,000 words, which is long considering the target audience for this kind of book (which features no particular kind of action but instead simply models after real life) is getting younger. There have been much shorter adaptions of the book that are still widely read.

While on the one hand this makes the target audience for Anne of Green Gables younger, in practice it means that many of the book reading the series are adults. Certainly there is much material-especially in the later books-that adults will appreciate a lot.

As to the actual merit of the book, Anne is an intriguing character, with her frequent imaginations. Although I haven’t had imaginings along a similar vein, it’s easy to understand where she’s coming from and emphasize with her. It’s good how the author doesn’t make her a perfect girl by any means (which I was a little afraid of at the beginning of the book), but just a regular girl.

Montgomery’s best trait is creating characters who we can understand and who become real to us before we know it. Partly this is because of her style where she gives such a rush of events in a relatively short writing space, which is a good lesson for authors who might want to do a similar thing.

There are also some things in the book which are a little weird. Anne is constantly concerned about having too many freckles and red hair, thinking them to not be attractive, which isn’t something I think modern girls will really care very much about. A lot of the traditions, customs, and terms that are in here are not at all relevant or even in existence today, so readers will have to be aware of that and possibly be prepared to look some things up.

I like some of the later books in this series better, but Anne of Green Gables is fun and more than good enough to read. Anne’s imagination and love of nature is captivating, for adults as well as children, and (despite Anne’s orphan origins) is a much more benign and realistic character than a lot of the crazy ones that are seen populating most kids’ novels.

A lot of girls will definitely still like it, but the age range of the book will be lower than when it first came out because kids seem to grow up faster than they used to. It is good for parents to read to/with children ages seven, eight, or nine, and great for older girls who will appreciate Anne’s escapades.

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The Wind in the Willows by Kenneth Grahame Review

March 2, 2015 by Daniel Johnston Leave a Comment

When a children’s book was praised by none other than sitting US President Theodore Roosevelt, that tells you two things: 1. The book is old. 2. The book is good enough for a President to spend his time reading it, so its got a good chance of being pretty good.

The Wind in the Willows by Kenneth Grahame follows anthropomorphic animals in their various adventures through the world. While there are many picture books about animals, long middle-grade books about them are significantly more rare. This book proves its quality from a reading today.

Summary

At the beginning of the book we meet the Mole, who is coming out of his hole as spring is beginning. He happens to run into a Rat and follows him to the river-bank, where there is a vibrant community of animals. The Mole has never seen it before, but is greatly impressed and thus takes up lodging by the river.

We soon meet the Toad, a rich fellow who is constantly getting himself into scraps by his addiction to motor-cars when he is a terrible and careless driver. We also meet the Badger, who Mr. Mole discovers after venturing in a dangerous manner into the Wild Wood. 

The four are close friends and we follow their escapades as the Rat has a yearning to explore the seas and Mr. Toad gets himself thrown in jail for stealing another person’s motor-car. There is even a full-scale battle as the four face an army of hundreds for control of the Toad’s ancestral home. They all seek to help each other through trouble, but nonetheless get in a normal amount of it for adventuresome animals.

Review

The humanlike attitudes of the animals and their going-ons are quite hilarious, and the characters are very identifiable. The Rat’s desire to go and explore the world is awesome, as is Mr. Mole’s folly into the woods and his affection for his old but now deserted house. Mr. Toad is quite a humorous character, escaping from prison and all and being extremely puffed-up. And Badger is just a sensible, wise fellow.

At first the setting seems to suggest that this animal world may be a secret one that we are not privy to, but further displays in the book such as paintings in the animals’ houses and policemen arresting Mr. Toad show that it could never happen in real life. The reader will nevertheless be drawn to the story and wonder if animals may really be like this.

The language in the book is quite up-to-date, although it contains a few words that current readers may find confusing. There is only one remark of preachiness in the entire book, while the entirety of it is simply in fun. It is easy to get into the story and feel right there in the action.

There is one scene that is intriguing and good where the characters have a sort of spiritual experience and witness a miracle.It seemed pretty out of place and was such a surprising shift of gears that I had to go back and re-read it at first to ensure the author really had just hopped from the fun lives of animals into the divine. At first I thought the author had made a mistake by not leading up to it, but now I think he likely did wrote it that way on purpose to really emphasize the event (paradoxically, by not emphasizing it at all). If that was his goal, he succeeded.

Kids tend to grow up now much faster than they did in 1903 when the book was written, and since it is a fairly good-sized book with over 58,000 words, it is best suited for upper middle-grade children. I wonder a little if kids at this age will appreciate a playful, funny book about animals (filled with action as it is) such as this one. No doubt many will get engrossed in the story and after that the chances of anyone putting it down are slim. It is different from many kids books these days in that it is pervaded by a sense of calm and relaxation, which is sorely missing from most middle grade books and altogether absent from those of the young-adult variety.

As evinced by Roosevelt’s remark, the appeal of this book is to older readers as well as younger, and I think a good many adults will take pleasure from this book. My biggest complaint is that there are not more adventures of these four written by the author. I will have to take a look at his other works, since this one cannot be anything but highly recommended.

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The Readers and Writers Paradise Podcast Episode 11

February 28, 2015 by Daniel Johnston Leave a Comment

Hi everyone, thanks so much for your support of Kid Writers Magazine Edition #2! It’s great to see the magazine getting into the hands of readers.

Today I’m releasing another episode of the podcast, which is something I know I haven’t done in awhile. My plan is to come out with a lot more in the future, so you can look forward to that. People have told me the podcast is their favorite thing about the site, and I enjoy doing it, too.

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Episode 11 is basically a discussion of different books that I’ve been reading lately. In the future it’ll be really cool to invite different people onto the podcast and have a discussion of books with them, so that’s something I plan on doing.

By the way, Erik and Felicia have been doing something called The Write Chat where they interview writers, and it’s really hilarious and well done. Both of them are published authors themselves, and they put all their humor into their episodes! So definitely check that out.

I hope you enjoy this episode and let me know what you think as well as of my comments about the books. I apologize for the background noise, I just ordered a new microphone so in the future that will be gone!

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Double Identity by Margaret Peterson Haddix Review

February 26, 2015 by Daniel Johnston 1 Comment

Double Identity is a science fiction book written by Margaret Peterson Haddix that has the twists and turns typical in a Haddix story. The book has some good things and some bad things, but is anything is for sure it’s that you’re not going to get bored reading anything by this author.

Summary

The book starts out with Bethany, the main character, on a drive to visit an aunt she knows nothing about. Her mom has been crying, something is wrong, and she is shocked when her usually loving parents tell her that they are leaving her with this aunt.

Her aunt Myrlie is nice enough, but they don’t know each other at all and even Myrlie doesn’t know why she has been asked to take Bethany. Myrlie is a kindergarten teacher, but takes time off to help Bethany get acquainted with her new life.

Bethany’s dad calls once a day, but his number can’t be tracked and Bethany has no idea what’s going on. She starts hearing the name of a girl named Elizabeth, and so many people start staring at her and asking if she really is Elizabeth that she no longer wants to go out.

Bethany is desperate to discover the identity of Elizabeth, and what is really going on in her family. How come her parents who have cared for her so much have simply deserted her? What is her connection to this girl she has never heard of? Why is there a strange man around who seems to be after her?

Review

This is a good book by Haddix. The twist of Elizabeth’s identity as well as Bethany’s was a big surprise and very interesting.On the other hand, there are some flaws about the book.

The lack of action is a serious problem. The whole of the book is Bethany finding out her identity and coming to grips with it, but she doesn’t actually do a single thing throughout the entire book. If it was me writing the book, I would’ve probably sent her halfway across the world and had her almost die a bunch of times, but I guess everyone has their own style.

Part of the reason why there’s so little action is that the book kind of drags out. It takes place over a time span of only a few days, which go pretty slowly. This is quite unlike Running Out of Time, Haddix’s most popular book, where the character risked her life a couple times. Speeding up this book and giving it more action would’ve been nice. 

The characters are another thing that are lacking a little. Double Identity spends a long time developing the characters, but I still don’t really identify with them too much. Bethany tells the story first person, so we know her very well, but although I can connect with her on a human level, I didn’t really get too personally with her. To me the most interesting characters were Bethany’s parents and the villain, for going through what they did and the choices they made, but those characters aren’t featured very much.

I also think this book might be a little frightening (it certainly would’ve been to me when I was younger). Kids will always wonder about stuff in science fiction books like this, but it would’ve been nice if there had been a disclaimer somewhere in the book that said this kind of thing can’t actually happen.

The premise of this book is good, and what it’s appeal is really more that of a mystery than a science fiction as we follow Bethany along and try to find out what’s going on with her life. Double Identity is engrossing, thought-provoking, and mostly a good read, although near the end the lack of action along with the bantering and self-talk of the characters got to be super annoying.

Overall, I think it’s worth it to read this book, but I wouldn’t recommend it. There are a lot better books, including by this author.

Filed Under: Margaret Peterson Haddix

Masterminds Book 1 by Gordon Korman Review

February 24, 2015 by Daniel Johnston 12 Comments

I’ve been super excited for the release of Gordon Korman’s new book Masterminds. Actually, it’s the first book in a trilogy, and it’s one of Korman’s action series. Like almost everything he writes, it’s very well done and captures the reader all the way through.

Summary

The book starts innocuously enough in Serenity, a very small town in New Mexico where everything is perfect. There’s no crime in Serenity, no problems. Everyone works at the local factory, which is supposed to manufacture traffic-cones. All the kids go to a nice school, where they take classes like Contentment, and most never leave the town.

Korman switches around narrators in this book, a tactic he’s used in both No More Dead Dogs and Schooled to great success. It allows us to get to know all the main characters and also to follow the story from multiple angles because Korman always likes to throw in crazy events that snowball together into a big explosion…often a literal one.

We start out with Eli Frieden, son of the mayor of Serenity and best friends with Randy. Randy and he are always getting into all kinds of trouble, playing all sorts of fun and crazy stunts. Something weird happens, though, when the two venture outside of city limits and Eli has a health collapse.

This is where we meet the Purple People Eaters, or security guys who run around the town who nobody knows. The big question is: Why does a town as safe as Serenity need that kind of thing? The kids are so sheltered they don’t know what a murder or crime even is.

Soon after they exit the town limits, however, Randy gets sent out of town. Eli knows something is fishy, and he enlists the help of a nice girl named Tori Pritel, and soon join forces with the rebellious Mailk (who always says he’s going to leave Serenity as soon as he can), Hector (Malik’s best friend who is really timid), and eventually Tori’s best friend Amber, a girl who rigidly defends the town of Serenity.

By more weird events happening, it isn’t long before the kids realize that something very strange is going on in the town. And that something could mean great danger for them.

Review

This is an awesome book. The science-fiction plot twist Korman pulls is excellent, and gets you really engrossed in the story. The kids have to work almost entirely on their own, going completely against the entire population of the rest of the town, and that’s something worth reading.

The characters are all very identifiable, although none of them is personally super deep or inspiring like some characters in other Korman books. What draws you in about them is that they think for themselves and they’re courageous, having to go totally against everything they’ve ever been taught and believed with only themselves to trust, so in that way they are inspiring.

This book reminds me a lot of the excellent Running Out of Time by Margaret Peterson Haddix in terms of them both having a fake town. The Haddix book had crazy plot twists till the very end but was also a more morally straight forward. Masterminds pushes the envelope of ambiguous morality in a lot of different directions, and I expect to see it tackle a lot of hard questions and events that would naturally come from this story.

I respect that Korman is writing some more science fiction type stories just to get into new stuff. I totally understand that as a writer, and Korman’s been a published author more than twice as long as I’ve been on the planet! So it’s good that he’s experimenting with new stuff, but his themes of kids doing great stuff and taking matters into their own hands is what sticks throughout his books and makes them so worth reading.

With all of that said, I cannot recommend this book right now for one very important reason: The series won’t be completed for another two years! It’s crazy, I know. This book was 322 pages, unlike other Korman trilogies where a single book would be little more than a third of that. Nevertheless, I wish they would come out with books more quickly, and Korman has said he’s writing them as quickly as he can but it’s the publisher’s decision. Of course I still wanted to read the book now, but it’s kind of ridiculous to expect kids to read a book and then a whole year for book two and then another year for the conclusion. Nevertheless, I congratulate Korman on another very engrossing book and I’ll be waiting for February, 2016.

Filed Under: Gordon Korman

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